Today we are going to do a presentation about our websites, blogs and major projects. We have to give each other some critical feedbacks. I will write down the feedback received from my classmates and teachers, also, the comments I would like to give my classmates.
1. Myself
Website:- Simple and organised / User-friendly
- Quality of Home Page background picture is not good
- Add Title & text should be bigger in the Home Page
- Should be more related to my progression route
- Should write more about myself
- Should post more major project
- Good customization and idea (try to make the blog more interesting)
Major Project:
- Clear and detail plan
- Should be hurry up
- Progression route is clear
- Idea is impressive
- Try to do research about visually impairment as many as I can (specifically existing products)
- Think about presentation (a set/collection? or sold separately? Maybe not only for visually impaired people?)
Blog:
- Background should be something related to my progression route
- Clear reflection and planning
- Interesting / meaningful theme
- Clean and organisation
- Show efforts to learn the software
- Well-developed
- Should put more pictures about major project
Presentation:
- Effects and gallery are good
- Talk more about the blog and major project
2. Dowhee
Website:- Home Page background is lively
- Own logo
- Biography is interesting (she draws herself)
- Better to put her own picture too!
Major Project:
- Apply her research into her major project
- Showing every process
- How does it related to digital arts
Blog:
- Many posts
- Many research and references about books (layout and book form)
- Great to see the idea development
- Practice of using software
- Try to make one in real life after doing research
- Do more reflections (based on what you have done, e.g. research/ practise/ working)
Presentation:
- Can speak louder
- Slower down the speed (sometimes it is too fast to move to next post/ cannot see the picture)
P.S. Click this to her blog.
3. Augustyna Janczak
Website:- Style
- User-friendly
- Simple and clear
- I like the colour and text font of the website
Major Project:
- Have to be hurry up (changed the plan)
- Good to show her inspiration
Blog:
- I like the background, it shows her progression route
- I would like to know more her other posts besides major project
- Do more research related to her major project
- Better to do more reflection (e.g. why would you change your idea)
- Show more process on her major project (e.g. Idea development/ process/ reflection)
Presentation:
- Loud enough
- Can be more confident
4. Khaled
Major Project:
Website:
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Major Project:
- I can see he has spent lots of time and efforts on it
- Lots of pictures
- Show his process
Blog:
- Background shows his progression route (I like it)
- Lots of research
- Lots of drawing but how can it related to digital arts
- I would like to know more about his reflections on his works
Presentation:
- Speak louder
5. Kate
- Should change the text colour (Especially "interior Designer")
- I would like to know her biography and contact page
Major Project:
- Better to show more process of designing the room
- Can see she put lots of efforts in it
Blog:
- Many practices (show her efforts)
- Lots of research
- Lots of reflections
6. Santiago
Website:- the text is a bit hard to read
- the size of text in biography is a bit small
- I like the style of gallery
- It is convenient to see his blog on his website
- Better to add the social contacts (e.g. Blog and Google+)
Major Project:
- It is good that he has many pictures to show his process
Blog:
- Should do more reflections (e.g. based on his research and his working process)
- Better to write more description, so it would be easier to understand
7. Sujin
Website:- the background is eye-catching and stylish
- The text colour beside the one in Home Page ("SUJIN", "home", "work" etc) should change colour (Background is pink-purple and the text is pink)
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Major Project:
- Detail planning
- Process seems going quite good
Blog:
- I like the background of blog
- Lots of research/reference
- Better to write more description, so it would be easier to understand
- Should do further reflection
- It is good to show your plan by words and mind-map
- Show your effort on your major project by doing Photoshop practice
- It is good they you show every process with lots of pictures (clear)
8. Naythun
Website:- Should improve the Biography
- Add a background (besides Home Page)
- Simple and user-friendly
Major Project:
- The meaning behind the major project is really good
- A clear and detail plan
- Put efforts on it (each piece of work spent 3 day to get done)
Blog:
- Lots of research (even do a study on a research)
- Good to show every process with lots of pictures
Thank you Janis
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